My inexpert attempt at making a book trailer for Builder!

[PS Power]

So far it has one upvote and one downvote. (I was the upvote, so quality might not be that high? I tried, but...) The downvote is almost certainly my hate stalker. He attacks anything I do on Youtube. (It's an actual thing. One guy that goes after anything I do at all. Regardless of topic. I'd hoped that not doing anything for a year would be enough to throw him off, but... Meh, at least this time he didn't blow up the comment section.)



So, go in with low expectations?

Still, I am trying to do new things!

[Gary F. York]

All I can say is my own opinion having watched the trailer: it would not have made the least bit curious, let alone enough so to make me want to check out the first few chapters for free.

For that matter, I initially found your work accidentally. (Some other author had written a story where a young girl goes back in time -- accidentally -- and checking for a sequel, one of your books was listed as "You might also like....") "Friendzoned," was my first. After that, the Keeley Thompson books. Then -- it never stopped. You keep cranking them out; I keep reading them.

Best,
G.

[PS Power]

Okay: What would have made you curious and want to check out the first chapters?

[Gary F. York]

[PS Power]

So, a brighter tone?

I have to be careful not to give away too many story elements, but I was wondering if people would like to know more about that, but... It's difficult. If I do too much, it will create problems.

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Oh, ALSO: Thanks for the feedback!

Always.

[MarciaA]

Well I’ve been grabbing books off Facebook, authors post a photo of the book with a couple compelling paragraphs, enough to get me interested and it works. I know you aren’t a fan of Facebook but it might help?

[PS Power]

I could try that. Maybe some music in the background? Not for Facebook or Twitter. But instead of what I did?

I'll try that next time I do one.

Thanks!